Archive for the ‘Story’ Category

New story: Schizophrenic Computer

Monday, November 2nd, 2009

Another old one. I submitted it to Clarkeworld, and got binned.

I ran it past Critters. Some mixed responses. Some people really liked it, they ‘got it’. Lots of people hated it, and didn’t really know what it was about. Still, somewhat encouraging.

Again, text format only for now:

Schizophrenic Computer

I guess the main verdict on it was that it was too rushed. Which is fair enough, I wrote it in a morning, in about 4 hours or so…

New story: ArchaeologistReportA51253

Monday, November 2nd, 2009

New story: ArchaeologistReportA51253

I wrote this absolutely ages ago actually, just before I started playing with interactive fiction.

I submitted it to … Strange Horizons? … it was a while back, I can’t really remember. Anyway it got rejected :-/ I think it’s an interesting story though.

Anyway…. :

html version
text version

Created a mini-rpg! Or the first level/stage of a full rpg, depending on how one looks at it…

Wednesday, July 29th, 2009

Created a mini-rpg! Or the first level/stage of a full rpg, depending on how one looks at it…

It’s here:

  • Play in browser (needs Java applets enabled; no save or restore)
  • Download z-code (needs z-code interpreter such as frotz or xzip, note that jzip doesn’t support restore)

I’ve put quite a lot of work into making it easy to use. For example:

  • Most things (in theory, everything, but I know there are surely slips…) report what you can do to it, when you “examine” them
  • Locations report location-specific things you can do, like “buy” or “save”, when you do “look”
  • The cave map… I wanted it to be more than one room, but I didn’t want some endless maze, since any complicated map will be hard to remember, so, well, you can see for yourself how well the method works ok?

The game includes, well I kept it as simple as possible, to make it something I could finish, rather than just some impossible-to-finish thing, but it has:

  • two different weapons
  • three monsters, plus a boss monster
  • a simple quest to complete
  • a shop
  • health potions
  • a simple village
  • a simple dungeon
  • a simple battle system

It’s heavily based on Final Fantasy III, but that’s not a bad thing I feel since it means it’s something I can finish, and because Final Fantasy III was, and is, fairly successful.

It’s not graphical, you can’t have everything…

New version of fanjiechaodan, with list of things you can do

Tuesday, July 28th, 2009

New version of fanjiechaodan, with list of things you can do

Old version:

>x phone

Blue plastic telephone with large white buttons.
As you touch the phone, it rings.

New version:

>x phone
As you touch the phone, it rings.

The phone is ringing. Pick it up!

Things you can do to the telephone: answer.

You can play it in your java-enabled web browser here or download the z-code file and run it in a z-code interpreter on your computer.

First adventure story! Fanjie chaodan: cooking a chinese dish

Monday, July 27th, 2009

First adventure story! Fanjie chaodan: cooking a chinese dish

I’ll let the adventure tell the story for now, other than what the title tells you.

I’ve tried to make it:

  • Simple enough to finish writing.
  • No pointless, stupid deaths. Actually, in theory, you can’t die.
  • I’ve tried to make it so that it is fairly easy to follow along, with enough clues, rather than random obscure puzzles with no clues.

You can play it directly from your web-browser if you have Java enabled, or you can download the z-code file, and an appropriate z-code interpreter.

Interpeters to play the raw z-code file:

  • For Windows, you can use Frotz
  • From ubuntu, you can use jzip, which you can get by doing: “apt-get install jzip”
  • For other systems (Palm, PocketPC, Mac…), you can check here

New Short Story: Virtual Crime

Thursday, July 2nd, 2009

New Short Story: Virtual Crime.

Oscar is sentenced to death for speeding in a computer game.

3800 words.

New Story: The Freezer

Sunday, May 31st, 2009

New story: “The Freezer”.

4500 Words.  Finished 31 May 2009.

Toby duplicates himself, with adverse consequencees for his life.

Influences: “My Other Life”, by Chuck Rothman; and “Anachron“, by Damon Knight.

This is the first of my short stories that my girlfriend thinks is well written.